First Draft
Second Draft
Final Draft
Reflection
I chose this topic I wanted to show the passionate side of me and my will to help the community and I believe that it did. Can my first draft even be called an essay? Looking back on it, I am ashamed. I needed to make it longer, to give it a better hook, and to make it more college essay oriented. In my second draft I elaborated on the points of my initial essay. With each essay I elaborated more and more. I again was able to learn from the concept of showing and not telling. I just need to apply this consistently.